"He glanced at her briefly, not taking any more notice of her than he had the cat, who stood patiently at his dish, hoping someone might realize it was time for noms. "
Love this description...really brings out how distant their relationship is. And the cat waiting for his noms had me giggling.
Great start to the story...except for the fact that I'm not in a stale marriage at this point, this sounds exactly like me - life had gotten in the way for 15 or so years before I remembered what I was missing in the Jovi world - so I can totally relate to Lizzy! Oh to be her as Jon took notice of her during the concert! Can't wait to see where this journey takes us.
"He glanced at her briefly, not taking any more notice of her than he had the cat, who stood patiently at his dish, hoping someone might realize it was time for noms. "
ReplyDeleteLove this description...really brings out how distant their relationship is. And the cat waiting for his noms had me giggling.
Great start to the story...except for the fact that I'm not in a stale marriage at this point, this sounds exactly like me - life had gotten in the way for 15 or so years before I remembered what I was missing in the Jovi world - so I can totally relate to Lizzy! Oh to be her as Jon took notice of her during the concert! Can't wait to see where this journey takes us.